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Offline DangerRanger

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tip of the day
« on: August 15, 2009, 08:50:31 AM »
Currently reads:  Every hero start with 1200 Fame. You can win Fame when you defeat another hero at the Imperial Arena. Fame is awarded to hero only if he fights 1 vs. 1.

First sentence should read:  Every hero starts...

Fame is awarded to hero only if he fights 1 vs. 1.

Third sentence should read:  Fame is awarded to heroes only if they fight 1 vs. 1.

Or, if you want to keep it singular:  Fame is awarded to the hero only if he/she fights 1 vs. 1.
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Offline Charon

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Re: tip of the day
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2009, 09:13:54 AM »
Another typo
Currently: "Warriors can equip all kinds of armor. Also, they can learn the skill to yield weapons in both hands."
Should be: "Warriors can equip all kinds of armor. Also, they can learn the skill to wield weapons in both hands."
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